I wanted to redesign my spreads on the story "Roll On" and get rid of all the text on the splash page.
Here is the more readable and less cluttered version:
I also pulled the red bar from the splash page and repeated it throughout the rest of the feature to make the entire design more uniform.
Better? I think so.
I DID A CIGARETTE BOX TOO! It was one of the covers I played around with, but ultimately ended up deciding that, because it was a photo story, I should probably use a photo for the cover. I am glad that you were bold enough to do a more graphic approach to the assignment.
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